Dear Andrew Guan,
I really like your article! It’s very “to the point” and concise. Although, in the third paragraph, “instead” is capitalized when there’s just a comma, and there’s an extra S, everything has perfect spelling and grammar, as far as I can tell.
I hope most people will decide to get vaccinated, because covid is not something to mess with. While the fatality rate isn’t, say, 50%, the numbers would still be quite big if everybody got infected.
And while the children aren’t at as much risk as adults, I still hope that the vaccines will eventually apply to people under 12 years old.
Like I said before, I truly hope people stop believing that the vaccine injects microchips and is poison or something. Great writing.
From,
Emily Gu