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Letter to the Editor: Stanley Cup Playoffs

By Kevin Bao


To the editors at CBC Kids News


I think the article was really amazing because there were a lot of facts that had to be searched up. It is really good in a way because there are a lot of words describing events and stuff like that. Those things make the article so much more interesting. The Stanley Cup was described really nicely because you said how the playoffs and final 4 are going to be played which really intrigued me. I think you should add more people in the article as well because that tells us how well the players are doing. Very nice article, keep up the good work.


Source:

https://www.cbc.ca/kidsnews/post/nhl-is-back-and-the-stanley-cup-playoffs-are-just-around-the-corner

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