Dear Editor,
I have finished reading your article and I really enjoyed it! I really enjoyed your simplistic yet diplomatic usage of words, the way you were able to include so much information so quickly, and the topic you chose as well.
Regarding the vocabulary and format, I particularly liked the way paragraphs were created. In many of the paragraphs, there is a quote that is, in a way, the focus of the rest, with the other facts being stated surrounding the quote, and when there wasn’t, the quotes were simply alone. I liked the way you separated the information as it was very easy to read and comprehend. The vocab only made it even easier.
In addition, I just simply really liked hearing about this topic. I don’t usually read essays like these and I actually really liked that I was able to discover something that I actually found interesting. The presentation of the badges, the plans shared, I was very interested throughout the complete article.
The only criticism I have is that I think it would be even better if you wrote more about other parts of this topic. I think it would be even better if you included possibly the ranks of the space force, some prominent figures and some of the events that led to the events that had happened.
I really enjoyed practically every single aspect of your article, with barely any real criticisms. I’m actually quite looking forward to learning more about this specific topic and even just your articles! I never thought I would read an article like this but I was very pleasantly surprised. It was easy to read while still having a serious tone, I really appreciated it. So, thank you for writing this article.
Sincerely,
Moya Zhao